Comment below by copy/pasting your favourite line from this weeks Moon Landing writing.
Our focus was on 'adding lots of description' and 'showing not telling'.
Here was the picture prompt this week:
Wednesday, 22 May 2019
Moon Landing Writing Favs
Hello Room 22! I know you have been doing some awesome writing lately so now it is your time to share your favourite sentence from this weeks writing with everyone.
Comment below by copy/pasting your favourite line from this weeks Moon Landing writing.
Our focus was on 'adding lots of description' and 'showing not telling'.
Here was the picture prompt this week:
Comment below by copy/pasting your favourite line from this weeks Moon Landing writing.
Our focus was on 'adding lots of description' and 'showing not telling'.
Here was the picture prompt this week:
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Their sparkly eyes got wider and their mouths got lower as they gazed upon the planet we call home.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this sentence because it has a lot of detail. https://odslucat.blogspot.com/
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My favorite line that I wrote was 'The ground rumbled as the ship slowly descended to the rocky surface of the moon.'
ReplyDeleteI like it beacause it kind of relates to music. Like the word descended.
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Kia ora, I am Ronan. My favourite sentence is "their eyes went on the planet blue and green we call home Earth" because its not boring. Blog ya later
ReplyDeleteMy favourite line is:
ReplyDeleteThe shimmering night stars sparkled down on the rusty dusty moon as a dazzling site gazed upon the Astronauts.
The Astronauts eyes gazed upon the enormous earth that shimmered in the night sky in space.
Why I chose this was that its got very nice describing words about space.
Hi my name is Matilda Room 22
ReplyDeleteMy favourite sentence is this one I like it because it has lots of descriptive words. As I looked up into the dark space we saw a dazzling sight millions of shimmery stars shone down at us as we stared up into the blackness. Blog you later, Matilda
Kia Ora, I'm Eli. my favorite line is: As we strolled out our eyes went flash as the glaze of the blue and green globe covered the sky. I like it because it is the only one that is good.
ReplyDeleteMy favourite line is this one.
ReplyDeleteI feel like the whole moon is a black diamond. I like it because it is very creative.
Hi it's Vinnie from Room 22. My favourite sentence is Me jumping on the moon feels like my stomach is churning round and round, I feel very light weighted and I feel like a feather.I like this because it has got a lot of description๐ข๐ข๐ข
ReplyDeleteHi my name is and I am in Rm 22 I say is The black and white spaceship landed on the rock moon stars were shining in the Night sky amazing the astronauts could see the Blue and green plant we call home.it is the best one I have it is so cool a liked it.
ReplyDeleteMy favourite line in my story was 'The astronauts eyes lit up as they admired the beauty of the delicate planet full of life known as Earth'
ReplyDeleteI like it because it has a lot of adjectives that I enjoyed writing.
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Tasfia
My favorite line I wrote was "As the Astronauts gaze at the green and watery planet there eyes are shining with excitement" I like this sentence because it has different idea on the colours of the earth 'The green and watery planet' so yea that's my favorite line because it has different ideas for the colours of what I'm talking about.
ReplyDeleteHello RM 22 it's me Gina, your favorite class mate!
ReplyDeleteThe sentence I would like to share with you is this: The Mothership peacefully bounced in space. I like this one because it shows you that its floating in space instead of telling you.
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Gina
This is my favorite line of my space landing writing. My eyes are dead because the earth is so bright. This is my favourite writing because it has some description.
ReplyDeleteThis is my Favourite line. The ship touched down on the rocky grey moon. I like it because I said touch down. Bye By Lucas๐๐๐๐๐๐
ReplyDeleteHello Its Cheese Lover! (Rowena). My favourite line is
ReplyDeleteI gazed up in the sky at the vivid looking round shaped ball it was nature green and beautiful blue.
I like it because the description is nice
And my 2nd favourite line..
As the stars shimmer and gloom I wondered why isn’t the moon dazzling cheese when I was little I always saw the moon as the yellow moon.
I like it because it includes cheese.
My favourite line is this As the huge rocket carefully landed on the moon the astronauts bounced off the huge rocket in zero gravity .2 the stars shined so bright they burnt your eye’s sort of.
ReplyDeleteHi i'm Zion-LI from Room 22 my Favourite sentence from moon landing is: As we were floating in thin air BOOM! as the Rocket landed it sounded like elephants and hippos in a stampede Running away from the predator.
ReplyDeleteThat was my favorite sentence because it was very descriptive.blog yaa later here's a link to my bloghttp://odszion-li.blogspot
The black and white colossal spaceship landed on the the rocky moon stars were shining in the night sky amazingly the astronauts could see the blue and green earth glistening.
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