Hi it's Franny Room 22, My favourite line is: “ I am fed up with life already, even though I have only been alive for about five seconds” the turtle hatchling thought to herself. I like it because it is funny and my turtle is very negative. Blog you later, Franny
Hello it's Vinnie from Room 22. I like this sentence 'As soon as she grabs her way out of the shell she scatters as fast as she can to the water'I liked this one because I used describing words. Blog Ya Later BYE!🐢🐢🐢
Hi it's keane from Rm 22. My favorite line is "It flutters its eyes shaking the sand out of his eyes as it looked at the beach ahead." I like this sentence because of how I described it and cause it fits the picture.
Hi my name is Zac from room 22 My favourite line was this 'I hatched from my shell and scuttled off to the big wide open ocean'. I like the sound of it and other stuff. By Zac
Talofa it's Ariella-brooke from Rm 22 My favorite line was: 'It blinked for the first time as it came out of the dark and gloomy egg, and stared at the clear long big blue beach'. I like it because It reminds me of clear blue beaches.
Hi my name Finley and I am in Rm 22. My favourite line is 'A new baby turtle was born from the egg. The baby turtle legs were going to the ocean. The ocean air was nice'. I like my line it is so cool. Blog you later Finley.
Talofa RM 22 it's your favorite class mate. GINA! My favorite line is: 'As the newborn turtle emerged from the egg, he knew his life was already in danger.' I like this line because it shows you instead of telling you.
Please be sure to check out my blog: https://odsgina.blogspot.com/
Talofa lava my name is Marley in Room 22. to be honest i just love all turtles. My favourite line from this is...
the baby turtle blinks and closes its eyes to block out the sunlight, then it climbs out of the egg and looks at the blue ocean ahead of it. that is something that i write. Blog ya later. From MArley. >﹏<
HI Luca here this is my favourite sentence because it has a lot of detail 'The beautiful newborn TURTLE plunged its magnificent limbs as it felt the breeze caress its whole entire body'. BYE!🐢
Hello it's Ava from Room 22. My fav line is As its eyes adjusted to the sun light it gazed at the warm sand and cool water that stretched out in front of her. I like this line beacause I love the describeing words I used Blog you later
Kia Ora. I am Ronan. My favourite sentence is this "This turtle is smashing through the shell of the egg to start the cycle.". I like it due to WOW words. Blog ya later
Hi Rachel my name is Zion-li my best sentence is 'As the turtle emerged out of the pearl-like shell and ran into the deep blue sea' here's a link to my blog http://odszion-li.blogspot.com
Hi My name is Rowena! This is my story! As I cracked the egg shell, I Gazed up in the beautiful blue sky and thought of cotton candy while staring at the white clouds. I looked down at the brown sand I thought of brown sugar! I knew I had to face a challenge which was passing the sand to the ocean. I ran as fast as a cheetah I was sooo close to the ocean this GOD DAMMIT BIRD CAME UP AND SURROUNDED ME! I was DOOOOOMMMEEEDDD but I had a plan heh heh. I ducked down in my shell and casually walked under the bird. Heheheh. Then walked up in the ocean and swam away happily. And This Is My Happy Ever After. You should check out my blog http://odsrowenap.blogspot.com/ Bye Bye!
Hi everyone, this is the start of my story As I battle my way too the glistening blue sea I hear birds squawking above me. I know if I don’t move fast I’ll be eaten. I can see the sparkly sea in front of me, I’m nearly there . Then disaster struck. A god damn bird landed in front of me blocking my path! I mean seriously how rude. I can’t believe it! Geez I just want to meet my mum and this god damn bird is stopping me! Blog ya later Saana
My favourite lines are 'As the turtle Pushed and shoved' and 'then all of a suddenly a crack the open free to the wide dangerous world with vultures, big fish bigger than your head as the baby turtle ran has fast as it can which is like 1cm an hour.'
we were writing a story about a turtle breaking out of its shell this is my favorite line 'As I pushed and attacked the thin white walls that surrounded me when my head popped out and I saw the line of sand curving around a raging blue sea'. Blog you later Matilda
Hi it's Franny Room 22,
ReplyDeleteMy favourite line is: “ I am fed up with life already, even though I have only been alive for about five seconds” the turtle hatchling thought to herself. I like it because it is funny and my turtle is very negative.
Blog you later, Franny
Hello it's Vinnie from Room 22. I like this sentence 'As soon as she grabs her way out of the shell she scatters as fast as she can to the water'I liked this one because I used describing words. Blog Ya Later BYE!🐢🐢🐢
ReplyDeleteHi it's keane from Rm 22. My favorite line is "It flutters its eyes shaking the sand out of his eyes as it looked at the beach ahead." I like this sentence because of how I described it and cause it fits the picture.
ReplyDeleteBlog ya later
Hi my name is Zac from room 22
ReplyDeleteMy favourite line was this
'I hatched from my shell and scuttled off to the big wide open ocean'. I like the sound of it and other stuff.
By Zac
Talofa it's Ariella-brooke from Rm 22
ReplyDeleteMy favorite line was:
'It blinked for the first time as it came out of the dark and gloomy egg, and stared at the clear long big blue beach'. I like it because It reminds me of clear blue beaches.
Blog ya later
Ariella-brooke
Hi my name Finley and I am in Rm 22. My favourite line is 'A new baby turtle was born from the egg. The baby turtle legs were going to the ocean. The ocean air was nice'. I like my line it is so cool. Blog you later Finley.
ReplyDeleteTalofa RM 22 it's your favorite class mate. GINA!
ReplyDeleteMy favorite line is: 'As the newborn turtle emerged from the egg, he knew his life was already in danger.' I like this line because it shows you instead of telling you.
Please be sure to check out my blog: https://odsgina.blogspot.com/
Blog you later!
Gina
Talofa lava my name is Marley in Room 22.
ReplyDeleteto be honest i just love all turtles.
My favourite line from this is...
the baby turtle blinks and closes its eyes to block out the sunlight, then it climbs out of the egg and looks at the blue ocean ahead of it.
that is something that i write.
Blog ya later.
From MArley. >﹏<
HI Luca here this is my favourite sentence because it has a lot of detail 'The beautiful newborn TURTLE plunged its magnificent limbs as it felt the breeze caress its whole entire body'.
ReplyDeleteBYE!🐢
Hello it's Mason from Room 22. 'It is so bright my eyes are blinded'. I like this line because it describes what is going on. Blog ya later.
ReplyDeleteHello it's Ava from Room 22.
ReplyDeleteMy fav line is As its eyes adjusted to the sun light it gazed at the warm sand and cool water that stretched out in front of her.
I like this line beacause I love the describeing words I used
Blog you later
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Lucas. This is my favourite sentence is this one because I said the word jet fighter. 'The bird scoped down like a Jet Fighter.'
ReplyDeleteKia Ora. I am Ronan. My favourite sentence is this "This turtle is smashing through the shell of the egg to start the cycle.". I like it due to WOW words. Blog ya later
ReplyDeleteHi Rachel my name is Zion-li my best sentence is 'As the turtle emerged out of the pearl-like shell and ran into the deep blue sea' here's a link to my blog http://odszion-li.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteMy favorite line that I wrote was 'The turtles eyes glimmered as it gazed upon the adventure ahead'
ReplyDeleteI found it interesting to write.
Hi My name is Rowena! This is my story!
ReplyDeleteAs I cracked the egg shell, I Gazed up in the beautiful blue sky and thought of cotton candy while staring at the white clouds. I looked down at the brown sand I thought of brown sugar! I knew I had to face a challenge which was passing the sand to the ocean. I ran as fast as a cheetah I was sooo close to the ocean this GOD DAMMIT BIRD CAME UP AND SURROUNDED ME! I was DOOOOOMMMEEEDDD but I had a plan heh heh. I ducked down in my shell and casually walked under the bird. Heheheh. Then walked up in the ocean and swam away happily. And This Is My Happy Ever After.
You should check out my blog
http://odsrowenap.blogspot.com/
Bye Bye!
Hi everyone, this is the start of my story
ReplyDeleteAs I battle my way too the glistening blue sea I hear birds squawking above me. I know if I don’t move fast I’ll be eaten. I can see the sparkly sea in front of me, I’m nearly there . Then disaster struck. A god damn bird landed in front of me blocking my path! I mean seriously how rude. I can’t believe it! Geez I just want to meet my mum and this god damn bird is stopping me!
Blog ya later
Saana
My favourite lines are 'As the turtle Pushed and shoved' and 'then all of a suddenly a crack the open free to the wide dangerous world with vultures, big fish bigger than your head as the baby turtle ran has fast as it can which is like 1cm an hour.'
ReplyDeletewe were writing a story about a turtle breaking out of its shell this is my favorite line 'As I pushed and attacked the thin white walls that surrounded me when my head popped out and I saw the line of sand curving around a raging blue sea'. Blog you later Matilda
ReplyDeleteMy favourite line is when I write 'The turtle emerged from it's egg'. I like it because it describes how the turtle came out it,s egg.
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